The percentage of school aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010.

Essay topics:

The percentage of school aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010.

The table compares the proportion of 6-11 and 12-16-year-old boys taking part in different sports in the UK in 2010.

It is clear that boys aged 6-11 were generally more likely to play sports than other groups. In addition, football was the most popular type of sport for both groups.

For 6-11-year-old, the proportion of boy playing football was highest, at 87%, while the figures for basketball and cricket were significant at 35% and 45% respectively. At the same time, only 23% of total boys chose rugby. Meanwhile, the proportion of boys going swimming was lowest at 19%.

For 12-18-year-old, the proportion of boys who played football was also highest, at 78% while the figure for cricket was significantly lower at 34%. At the same time, the figure for basketball and rugby were 25% and 21% respectively. The figure for swimming also was lowest, at only 19%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86640868761 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9472577839 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126805986543 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637851298077 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723191709547 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108992785493 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798905815217 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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