The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Smoking has been an issue in the socity for a long time and despite the risks involved people continue with this habit. This essay will discuss the causes for this as well as suggest ways to control the same in society.
To begin with, one of the primary reason is inheritence. It has been found in a research that children inherit their habit of smoking from their elders, whom they have observed since childhood. They tend to mimic this activity as they find the process quite intriguing. This can be mitigated if the elders of the family are aware and ensure that they do not smoke in front of the children.
Furthermore, people tend to smoke due to increased stress at work. They justify smoking as a way to reduce this stress and find a solution while watching the smoke dissipates into air. A probable solution could be that offices introduce activities that would help their employees feel relaxed. Apart from relaxing, people will feel energised and be easily able to cope with all the situations.
Besides, many people develop this habit since teenage times and find it challenging to quit smoking as they face severe withdrawal symptoms due to prolonged dependence. There are several organisations and institutions who work jointly with medical team that helps such smokers gradually overcome this addition by meditation, hosting sessions and providing medications, when necessary.
To sum up, there are several reasons for a person to initiate smoking but it is high time to take measures to control the rate of smoking for a better society and healthier lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...on is inheritence. It has been found in a research that children inherit their habit of sm...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'quitting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: quitting
...e teenage times and find it challenging to quit smoking as they face severe withdrawal ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, apart from, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98113207547 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55308607121 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.974441205 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289987890432 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103440323276 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05738583404 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165522009572 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049963904108 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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