the dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Smoking has become one of the debatable issues around the globe due it's negative effects on human body. Though, many people still continue to smoke knowing the damage it causes to body and environment. This essay will highlight the causes of unwillingness of people to quit smoking and the measures which could be implemented to reduce smoking.
Overall, smoking has a destructive impact on individuals body and still, people are reluctant to quit smoking. The reason for this is the belief of people that smoking helps in reducing the stress. Majority of people have developed a mindset that smoking can relieve them of stresses and calm their nerves and subsequently people develop the urge to smoke continuously because it makes them feel relaxed. Another reason for surge in smoking is young adult's attraction towards smoking because it makes them feel unique differentiating them from other young adults who don't smoke.
However, there are certain remedies to reduce smoking. Individuals must be taught healthier ways of relieving themselves from stress such as yoga or working out. To promote these ways camps should be set up regularly in areas and advertisement should be displayed on television about ill effects of smoking and ways to quit smoking. In addition, government should add a chapter in school syllabus about the cons of smoking to prevent children from getting attracted and indulging into smoking. Moreover, local authority must ban the sales of cigarettes in surrounding areas of schools and public places and restrict people from smoking in public zones.
To conclude, smoking has dangerous effects of human body and it's a manipulation that smoking relives us of stress and makes us feel exclusive. People have plethora of reasons and ways to quit smoking gradually and start focusing on their health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vent children from getting attracted and indulging into smoking. Moreover, local ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22033898305 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66393233366 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0777942486 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2620525182 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104028909817 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633926225025 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168120365903 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476155164378 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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