Music has been and will continue to be the universal language of mankind. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Music plays a vital role in every individuals life for maintaining a healthy mental condition and bond with others un society. However, some people opine that listening to music is not helpful in establishing relationship with others. I agree with the statement that Music is universal language of mankind and this essay will discuss the same.
Overall, music has proven beneficial for humans in developing communication with people in their country as well as foreigners. Even decades before when not much advancements had been made in technology, people had radios to listen to songs. Individuals would gather in groups to listen to radios which enhanced attachments between them. Moreover, new technologies were introduced in recent years to listen to music for example, people listen to music online or certain apps like spotify and discuss their views over different genres of music. We get to know about other people's culture and lifestyle by their choice in genre of music.
Furthermore, we can even get to know the mental state of a person through the genre of music he is listening to. For example, if a person listens to romantic music he might be in love, or if he listens to sad music he might be in a state of distraught.
This may assist us to help the person in various ways. Also, if we move to another country and if we meet a person with same taste of music the communication is initiated in a positive way and the bonding is enhanced.
In conclusion, music has always been the best way of developing a communication with others in the past. In future also it will continue to stengthen the attachment of people worldwide because of its universal acceptance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...of music the communication is initiated in a positive way and the bonding is enhanced. In conc...
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Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...always been the best way of developing a communication with others in the past. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, as for, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8850174216 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78161845097 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540069686411 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6955153559 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.142857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183151855313 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686499545414 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746243700222 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107638622947 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578882604678 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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