Decisions often prove to be the crucial turning points of our lives, so a person should never make any decision alone. Do you agree?
It is well-known that decisions represent the way that people choose to live their own life and, because of this, what we decide has, sometimes, a crucial importance for our future. I totally agree with this statement and I support the necessity of making good decisions.
Despite the fact that some people believe that involving someone else in their choices would make them less independent, I believe the opposite. First of all, important decisions involve a huge amount of stress or anxiety, factors that can influence negatively the result. There are moments when we have to make a decision that can change our life forever and the first thought is to choose the easiest path, even though it is not the best one. In this situation, it is imperative to consult an objective opinion and see if the consequences are positive or negative, otherwise we risk to regret. This case can occur anytime, even though it is about what university we should choose or what career to follow.
Moreover, taking decisions making to another level, consulting other opinions is crucial when your choice is going to affect other people’s lives. In this case, we can refer to important people, such as CEOs, mayors or senators. They are not allowed to take any decision on their own, without consulting a number of people, because the consequences will not only be suffered by them, but by other people too. History stands out as an example for wrong decisions and their terrible repercussions.
In conclusion, I think that decisions are often too important to be made by only one person. People are different and an opposite idea is not always a wrong one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88928571429 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64312498643 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3496835039 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198494105963 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690409726157 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569145557126 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124914306585 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224398061782 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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