Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
One of the adverse human activities is deforestation. Forest are suitable habitat for floras and faunas. Cutting down trees will create serious effects on the environment, leading to the extinction of many species and potentially changing global climate. This essai will discuss several solutions that can be done to prevent deforestation.
The United Nation Food and Agriculture Organization (FAO) estimates the deforestation rate to be 1,3 million kilometers per decade. Action that can be taken by government and organization is to protect forest area, creating laws and policies that ensure forest are kept protected. Imagine what happens if the government does not care about the forest. These irresponsible people will cut down trees massively. Amazon Rainforest is one proof of the government's negligence. The development of intensive livestock production, combined with the increasimy consumption of meat in developed countries, is thus the main cause of Amazonian deforestation.
The last solution is Spreading awareness. Education should be designed to raise awareness of the impact of deforestation so that people would stop cutting down the forests. teach your family, friends or colleagues about the issues around deforestation. In theory the tree supplies oxygen to humans and absorbs carbon dioxide and other bio-masses, the tree also prevents erosion and helps maintain pollution. when trees are cut down, carbon dioxide that has been absorbed will be returned to the atmosphere, this can cause a greenhouse effect and can change the global climate.
In order to maintain the natural ecosystem to remain as before I think the steps above ar sufficient.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5703125 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01558452045 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6484375 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0527468641 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189491851417 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525918854412 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435966782742 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101936061997 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493891943165 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.