Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your knowledge and experience.
Solutions to Deforestation
The world has advanced greatly in a short period . Overall, human beings are more educated, earn more money, are healthier, and mobile. Similarly, nation states have developed with expanded, diversified economies and a burgeoning working and middle class. These advancements at both the individual and collective level has elevated practices like deforestation, which is now responsible for detrimental ramifications on planet earth. Even though, deforestation is an extreme hazard, the human race can employ methods to reduce the negative impacts incurred on the environment by such practice. There are a few solutions that will be addressed in this essay: one being the regeneration of plant life and the other being stricter global policing on logging.
As previously mentioned a primary climate issue is the clearing of forests for various reasons such as wood or grazing for livestock. This is permitting too many gasses to escape into the earth’s atmosphere. In order to circumnavigate this disadvantage, logging companies should replant trees in suitable areas that cultivate growth. This substitution will rectify the imbalance caused by eliminating other forest areas. This will restore the depleting ecosystem meanwhile allowing companies to continue profiting.
A second solution is the proposal of all governments and global organizations such as the UN Security Council creating effective legislation and initiatives against deforestation. Every government should agree to a policy that would prohibit any nation state or private company from extracting any living entity from the Amazon rainforest. It should be declared a World Heritage site and rendered the sole property of the indigenous inhabitants. The indigenous inhabitants should agree with the governments to leave the Amazon rainforest as is. Furthermore, international funds should be used towards financing scientific innovations in food consumption and production as well as alternatives to housing materials.
In conclusion, this essay discussed some potential solutions to deforestation. One would be to replant trees to replace those that are lost to logging. Second would be for governments all over the world to initiate, create, and follow through with policies and regulations that discourage logging yet increases innovation in alternatives to meet the demands of people on a global scale.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, similarly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7625698324 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18925325884 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625698324022 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5690972775 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.578947368 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166251549037 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458294937955 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222362397698 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08850136837 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226944155951 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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