Deforestation with myriad serious consequences for the natural wild is occuring on our planet because of human activity. Finding an intact solution for this is not simple. This is partly due to fact that it needs actions from a lot of different countries. However, as inviduals we can make our contribution by reduce and recycle products made from trees.
Recycling is an important part of being less wasteful. Most household and office papers can be recycled to make other useful products. For example, in my city, there is a group collecting used papers from different sources to make handmade souvenirs. Nowadays, recycling is very easy so that everyone is able to do it.
Reducing our use of paper might be the most effective way for saving forest. With the appearance of electrical technology, a lot of paper products become unnecessary. Newspaper, reports and some other things can be written and sent through internet, so that we no more need to print these onto papers. If we reduce using paper, logging industry will fell fewer trees.
These solutions may be too little compared with the impacts deforestation. But if we do it together, we can make it really different.
- deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with the serious result for the environment. what do you think can be done to solve this problem? 56
- The graph below shows the percentage of part time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'impacts'' or 'impact's'?
Suggestion: impacts'; impact's
...ons may be too little compared with the impacts deforestation. But if we do it together...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77185778717 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671717171717 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6923932764 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.7142857143 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176085776097 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622347951103 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374089802967 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110236487908 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380918117765 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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