With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to protect animals?
Today, some species of animals are facing a threat and few of them on the verge of extinction, owing to erosion, urbanization and non regular hunting of animals.In my opinion, it is predominant to shield these faunas and in order to implement it, cutting of trees, influx of population towards the cities and the activity of hunting should be stopped.
Firstly, animals protection is quite necessary for the human beings in terms of food.In various countries, people like to eat the meat of cows and buffaloes, especially in Russian countries.For example, the Individuals, who live in the North Pole region of the country solely depend on this type of meat.Secondly, animals are considered to be the major source of income for several countries.For instance, Australia is renowned for its wildlife, there by people from various countries come here to see the different kind of animals, which in turn boost the economic condition of a country.Thus, it is vital to save these animals for food and money.
There are innumerable solutions for preserving the animals.Firstly, cutting of plants must be banned by the government because animals, mostly rely on these for their meals.In fact, different sorts of animals have already been disappeared and if this process remains continue the day is not far when there is no animal on the Earth.
Furthermore, due to the progression in cities various forests have cut down, which would lead to the stage of deterioration of the animals.If these natural places no longer exist, then how can these animals be alive.In addition, the hunting of these animals from predators also lessening their population.To exemplify, a survey was conducted by the agency in which they found that only 20% of area in cities is for forests.
To conclude, the government and an individual should take steps ahead to conserve the species of the animals as well as natural places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10223642173 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89274851262 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.073959428 49.4020404114 336% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 319.4 106.682146367 299% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.6 20.7667163134 301% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.4 7.06120827912 459% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203423645233 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116343755045 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235660082013 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116343755045 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235660082013 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 13.0946893788 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 50.2224549098 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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