Demand for food is increasing
Food is a one of the basic needs of a human being. Globally, every year food consumption is rapidly growing and becoming a topic of grave concern in the upcoming years. In this essay we will discuss, the reasons of hike in the food consumption and which necessary steps international community have to take to fulfil the requirement of the food demands along with my opinion.
First of all, the main reason of increment in food consumption is growing population. However, with the population growth, food demand is also increasing. WHO, For example clearly mentioned in published report that the food consumption is going to inclined at 150 percentage by 2030. Furthermore, nowadays most of the societies are adapting the consumerism culture, which is lead to a more food wastage. Thirdly, the lack of advance technology and method in developing nations is another reason.
However, international community taking this problem seriously and using new methods and techniques. In the developed countries, new farming technologies are used by farmers to increase the crop production and decline the crop wastage. Moreover, scientist are also developing a hybrid crops and plants, which have a better production rate. Apart from that, developed nations providing a new technology to developing nations to increase the crop production.
In conclusion, i saying that the cut the food wastage is a necessary as increase the food production.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, third, thirdly, apart from, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28820960699 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98673356877 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558951965066 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.00312281 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1538461538 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328789536945 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104437130875 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863077218242 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203394015202 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898947239964 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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