It has become easier and become affordable for people to travel other countries. Do you think it is positive and negative development?
In the last few decades, travelling is feasible due to significance changes in migration system in many nations. Despite the travelling is feasible, it have a several merits and demerits. I believe that benefits of travelling over shadowed the drawbacks of travelling. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of travelling.
First and foremost, with travelling cheaper and popular, tourism industry is developed well and become a backbone of economy of many nations. Furthermore Many people are employed in air and tourism industry. Apart from this, people that live near in tourist places have a higher living standard because government want to better services to visitors.
Secondly, travelling play a integral role to campact gaps culutre and traditional understanding and leads to cultural interchanges. As a inllustation, every year many people travel to holy city of varanashi in India, to know traditions of indian culture. Apart from this, travelling plays important role to share science and technology with other and nations to make world better.
On other hand, travelling has drawbacks too. One major drawbacks is people carry harmful virus and bacterias with themselfs. While travelling these virus and becteria speard across areas of world. As an illustration, in 2017 Indian government identify Nipha virus, that was carried by man from malashyia. As a result, more then 100 people died with nipha virus.
To put it in a nutshell, i pen down saying that, it is necessary to overcome the drawbacks of travelling to make world better
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, then, well, while, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32258064516 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86348244936 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7962261912 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155632361028 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510366544666 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372016572253 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779449645531 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296942511628 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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