Essay topics:
It has become easier and become affordable for people to travel other countries. Do you think it is positive and negative development?
In the last few decades, travelling is feasible due to significance changes in migration system in many nations. Despite the travelling is feasible, it have a several merits and demerits. I believe that benefits of travelling over shadowed the drawbacks of travelling. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of travelling.
First and foremost, with travelling cheaper and popular, tourism industry is developed well and become a backbone of economy of many nations. Many people are employed in air industry. In addtition to this, travelling is
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... Despite the travelling is feasible, it have a several merits and demerits. I believ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 469.0 1615.20841683 29% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 87.0 315.596192385 28% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3908045977 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.05407580998 4.20363070211 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96270917573 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 58.0 176.041082164 33% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 149.4 506.74238477 29% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0893902216 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4285714286 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1418495084 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598342462919 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419350998738 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11515104352 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549491848384 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.09 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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