Demand for food is increasing worldwide.
What is the cause of this?
What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
food is one of the basic need of human beings as it provides energy and nutrition to the people. Consumption of food is increasing exponentially all over the world. Thus, it creates trouble for the farmer to arrange food for all the citizens.In this essay I would discuss about the major reasons of difficulty and also some potential solutions to this grim problem.
To initiate with, it is undeniable fact that the ever-expanding population and wastage are two main causes.In other words, ceaseless growth in the number of consumers raised the demand for food, which has brought a situation where crop production is not equivalent to per the demand for food.Moreover, carelessness about saving food also constitutes an another reason for rising in the demand, as people waste more food than consuming it. for an instance, it is a common sight that in big hotels and restaurants, large amount of food is wasted on a daily basis, rather than proper utilization of food.
In similar vein, this grave problem can be resolved with proper initiatives like awareness of modern farming methods and by boosting the agriculture sector.To clarify this, International community should take the responsibility that government of every country must promote agriculture.Individuals consider farming as non-profitable activity, and this mindset could be changed by providing huge tax exemptions and subsidies, which may results in growth of farming occupation.Furthermore, modern and advanced methods of farming can also reduce this problem of scarcity of food, as it increases nutrition and production of food at faster rate.For an example, organic farming help many countries, by improving the sustainability of food, resulting in fulfilling the requirement of citizens.
Hammering the last nail, although there are numerous issues faced by peasant, these could be managed by adopting the modern methods of farming and by promoting farming occupation.In this way, countries could sustain food for the multitudes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, thus, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50641025641 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26839952982 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608974358974 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 233.921057676 49.4020404114 474% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.428571429 106.682146367 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.5714285714 20.7667163134 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284333768181 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134380160523 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443386778633 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167576751217 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511250573217 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.57 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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