Every nation stands out with own culture, language, traditions, and sometimes with unique beliefs and religion. Undeniably all citizens know the value of their cultural heritage and feel proud to represent the country's in the international arena. Although customs and lifestyle of Uzbek population is very similar to another countries', there are some habits in my culture that I would like every part of the globe to acclimatize.
To begin with, in Uzbekistan folks are opened to meet everyone no matter which circumstances are ahead and this condition makes the whole nation closer even relating to another race or origin. From my own experience, we had a foreign guest from Europe couple years ago and every dweller with whom he met there did not treat him the way he that would be dissatisfied. When he left the country, this man from abroad was extremely pleased and captivated that he told myriad number of gratitude towards the whole culture and population. Furthermore, he is planning to bring his entire family and introduce the warm uzbek welcome.
Yet another custom that I firmly believe would benefit other nations of the world is having dinner jointly with all family members. After exploring the dissimilarities in lifestyle of other people and my nation, eating together that is not uncommon in my country is ocassionally applied in abroad. By sharing a food with the closest ones, there is given an opportunity to discuss how they spent the day or which obstacles and joyful moments someone faced. Therefore, there is no doubt that relationships between parents and offsprings are now complicated, but these opportunities every evening seem as a reason to fix them.
In conclusion, every nations has its own merits and drawbacks, but I believe that outstanding customs in lifestyle of uzbek people seem beneficial for every population of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1045751634 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79108691649 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624183006536 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.3820617989 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12500530233 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423635792949 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039812746666 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707940453932 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156044969283 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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