Describe a place in other countries where you would like to work
Singapore is one of the most dynamic and business-oriented nations in the world with an open economy and numerous achievements in many fields such as tourism, service, science,etc. It is not an exaggeration to say that this island is a dream place for most hospitality-major students and I am not an exception. My lifelong ambition is that I can become a hotel manager in Marina Bay Sand, which is the most luxurious hotel in Singapore.
Marina Bay Sands is an integrated resort located in front of Marina Bay in Singapore, which has three hotel towers connected by a 340-metre-long roof terrace named the Sands SkyPark. Moreover, there is a fantastic Theatre Book, a Convention and Exhibition Facilities Block as well as the Casino. It is well-known as the most iconic skyline in Singapore with the marvelous largest infinity pool perched 200 meters in the air, which has been designed with a vanishing edge. Hence, customers indulge in contemplating the breathtaking panoramic scenery of Singapore while they are soaking in the rooftop pool.
There is research showing that the average salary for a manager in this workplace is SGD 6,000 per month, which is 7% higher than the average in Singapore. Beside offering a great deal of executive salaries , the company also pays a wonderful compensation for official employees which covers permanent health insurance and includes excellent holiday entitlement.Understanding the biggest fear which most hospitality management students face is the lack of experience in dealing with demanding customer, Marina Bay Sands guarantees that students will be carefully trained with top-rated experts in the most competitive learning environment to ensure they have enough quality as well as professionalism to work in this difficult field.
In conclusion, Marina Bay Sands has a variety of elements forcing me to attempt to study studiously for being offered the scholarship from Singapore universities as well as having opportunities to become a proficient hotel manager.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...fields such as tourism, service, science,etc. It is not an exaggeration to say that ...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ering a great deal of executive salaries , the company also pays a wonderful compe...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Understanding
... includes excellent holiday entitlement.Understanding the biggest fear which most hospitality...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35220125786 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29752850547 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.139502074 49.4020404114 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.2 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0164637749208 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0062699084496 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0135321981723 0.0667982634062 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00960772053787 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00975599600679 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.