Describe something healthy you enjoy doing.
You should say:
what you do
where you do it
who you do it with
and explain why you think doing this is healthy.
The activity I like to do to be healthy and keep-fit is walking. I am very with my job and take care of my son. He just turns 5 years old. Actually, I am not keen on doing exercise. However, after delivering the baby, I gained weight so much. Up to now, I have not still lost any weights. After the recent annual check-up, a doctor advice me to do exercise, so I started walking after working time, and I really love this physical activity. Walking for 30 minutes a day or more on most days of the week is a great way to improve or keep up your overall health. Doing the physical exercise is the habit I have developed to keep the physical and mental health.
I leave my office for walking by 5 PM, then I go to the park near my house and start walking. This park is very large and full of the trees, so the fresh air is very healthy for health. Actually, none of my friends live near my house, so I often do walks alone. However, I enjoy it so much because I can listen to the sound of the birds and breathe the fresh air.
The park is full of trees and bushes, so the air and environment remain fresher than other places. breathing the fresh air, doing the exercises and finally walking to keep fit is definitely a very healthy habit. A sound mind lies on a sound body and this habit that I adopted is pretty helpful for keeping a sound health and sound mind. Besides, walking alone is the best relaxing time to me after a tired working day, I think and come up with the create ideas in this time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Breathing
...nment remain fresher than other places. breathing the fresh air, doing the exercises and ...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...d working day, I think and come up with the create ideas in this time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, finally, however, really, so, still, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1433447099 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19624507082 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529010238908 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.874366708 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4117647059 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835042572164 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318113674164 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348349485668 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600522899774 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160906042875 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 12.4159519038 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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