Despite its negative health effects, the tobacco industry remains an important part of the economy of many nations. Discuss.
You should write at least 250 words.
Tobacco industry has been one of the highest economy of many countries irrespective of their detrimental health impacts. While, thinking this phenomenon, the main reason behind that may be unsound lifestyle of many and the financial output from the industry may pull back the government to make illegal. Both the public and government has the responsibility to this trend, and health education and make use of alternative economic source would be helpful to control.
To begin with, overwhelming majority of people aware about the health hazards related to tobacco and by products though, negligence to self fitness may helps to grow such industry. Many people suffered with disease related to tobacco like cancer, tumors, and so on would be the result of excessive consumption. People may often used such substance to get relief, get ride of tensions, work and family pressure or just for an entertainment. Such things may influence the habit and become addiction in the future may lead to unhealthy life style, most presumably, some may have difficulty to withdraw such crisis. For instance, twelve year old child from juvenile home confessed that, the habit may achieved by the parents who worked in the tobacco making company.
Not to be out done, tobacco industry has been the monetary basement of many nation including the field of import and export trade markets. Owing to the fact that, most of the government may close the eyes of health issues, somehow fail to conduct or educate the people about the consequences. By the stimulative and financial effect of tobacco may captivate the public and authority unlikely to inhibit the production and usage to some extent. However, alternative programs like introduce innovative employment sources, public education, or at least mitigate the dosage of tobacco content may helpful to the public and nation to the core. For example, tobacco company from Bangladesh, develop alternative coaching classes to the workers had flourish the life style gradually and now that company became a top number in linen production.
To sum up, although, tobacco industry might be financial source, the deleterious impacts on public health and thereby government treasure. Thereby, to identify other sources and educative programs may thrive the people and such countries would surpass the financial crisis indifferent to general health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
...h crisis. For instance, twelve year old child from juvenile home confessed that, the ...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun nation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many nations'.
Suggestion: many nations
...ustry has been the monetary basement of many nation including the field of import and expor...
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Line 5, column 742, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'flourished'.
Suggestion: flourished
...ive coaching classes to the workers had flourish the life style gradually and now that c...
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Line 5, column 742, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'flourished'.
Suggestion: flourished
...ive coaching classes to the workers had flourish the life style gradually and now that c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, at least, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32095490716 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70547407121 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557029177719 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 23.4135763085 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 133.733333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133313064538 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527356358889 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044364622595 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897376637312 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260828314734 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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