Despite a large number of Gyms, sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world .
What problems are associated with this ?
What solutions can you suggest?
Although, sports facilities such as gyms and clubs are available nearly everywhere. Laziness has become dominant in the modern societies. So, in this essay I will discuss the problems which arose due to this phenomenon and what are the possible solutions to it.
On the contrary to the medical advices being introduced continuously by medical researches to practice any kind of sports on daily basis, we still tend to ignore these instructions and to be less moving. These kinds of reckless actions we are doing nowadays will increase the number of diseases in our bodies; moreover, the number of ill people shall grow rapidly thus our productivity and effectiveness may be minimized. For an example, employees who sit all the day in front of computers without moving their legs, eventually they will suffer from spinal column injuries and bad joints.
Having the determination to overcome our luxury lifestyles and the desire to not move is mainly the solution to our problem. Human beings’ bodies are designed to be always in some kind of action; consequently, we should have the willingness to do sports periodically without getting bored. Swimming for three times per week for one hour or walking each day for at least one twenty minutes could be enough to restore our healthy bodies and the ability to relieve the surrounding stresses
In conclusion, we have created critical problems to our own selves due to our unhealthy habits; even though, we are facing sever issues regarding our lives, but the solution to it is very simple and affordable even if it seems to be exhausting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, thus, at least, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03396226415 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7437102413 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.631171766 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.222222222 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7777777778 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0889983817257 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431641653938 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601579067534 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637960570403 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560242224368 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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