Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
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Do you imagen waking up someday found that technology disappear? An often controversial topic is how modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker. According to the global development and the many invitations we have these days technology has become an irreplaceable aspect in our day to day life. For some technology helps to finish the work in a very easy way and quicker than the past. However, others said that it make people busy and ignore their work. The both opinion will be discussed before a conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, many people argue that utilize technology will help them to finish the numerous amount of work in a time less than time they take while working by the ordinary ways. For instance, in their office if they had been asked for a report contain of ten pages they will do it on laptop in such two hours, not to mention that they will use internet in their laptops to search for any information they need. On the contrary they may perhaps spend twice the time to finish the same report if they use the old work methods. Moreover, technology helps student to get their subjects or prepare their researches by using technological devices such as laptops, smartphones and iPad. As the two example show, technology helped too much people to carrying out their work in a quit good way.
On the other hand, there is a point of view that it has only made people busier, although the opponent of technology use it daily but they intent that it has a bad impact on humanity. They said that the use of it may lead to not caring about the work and it’s quality. For example if someone spending all night playing or chatting on his/her phone they will go to the work very exhausted due to not had have the enough time to sleep and have some rest and they may perhaps make many mistakes in their work . Therefore, they found it a waste of time.
On the whole, after examining the two point of view it is be clear that technology is a two edges weapon. In my opinion, I see that the technology extremely important in our life nowadays and we can deal with our life without it. Thus, people must use it in a good way which help them deal with difficult aspects in work but not let it damage their
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Message: Use simply 'may', 'perhaps'.
Suggestion: may; perhaps
...rmation they need. On the contrary they may perhaps spend twice the time to finish the same...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...nd it’s quality. For example if someone spending all night playing or chatting on his/he...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... the work very exhausted due to not had have the enough time to sleep and have some ...
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Line 4, column 461, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'may', 'perhaps'.
Suggestion: may; perhaps
...me to sleep and have some rest and they may perhaps make many mistakes in their work . Ther...
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44309927361 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35926049026 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2486274504 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.944444444 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263220789568 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929506865736 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087881510638 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163956192803 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062974088407 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.