In developed countries, one of the debating issue for students is to take a gap between their highschool and college. Although some believe they should take a break, some believe they should start to study right after they finish their highschool. I think it is a good thing for them to take this break
Students who go working or travelling after they finishing high school would gain several benefits. The person, who goes working could earn lots of money and finds out about their skills and even their weaknesses so they could work on them and be a better employee. They would know how they can work and would learn a lot from other people that would be useful for them in future. Similarly, the person, who goes travelling would be able to meet many people from different countries and visits lots of places around the world; therefore, they would gain many memories while they are on their feet without any supports from their parents so they would be more independent people than before.
Besides, all the benefits for students who go working or travelling, this gap may have some drawbacks. Like person who goes working may get heartbroken or get hurt because they do not know how can they work and people could be cruel to them. Additionally, they would get tired because of working hard, so they would be devastated. The other group who goes travelling, may get homesick and even do not good experiences so they would be heartbroken. Additionally, they waste lots of money so if they do not gain good experiences, they will just pay a lot of money that would not be worth it.
In conclusion, students who take this gap, would gain many invaluable experiences but it may have several drawbacks for them. So before deciding to take this break, it is necessary to weigh the benefits against the disadvantages and after seeing all the aspects then decide to do it or not.
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...antages and after seeing all the aspects then decide to do it or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71739130435 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50248773514 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481884057971 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0946790639 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.363636364 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208484900725 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102117873222 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251250561732 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147859491517 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028460130978 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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