In the developed world average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this causefor individual and society. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing population.
Advanced world status makes an average time of an individual is expected to live, based upon the year of birth; their current age and other demographic conditions, including sex had been rising dramatically. This essay will first suggest that the main concern with this issue such as workplace demography and diversity along with that the medical illness of the elderly people and then submit a viable solution to decrease such consequences of old age people by an effective legislative plan.
The foremost problems caused by longevity are salubrious inactive older workers and unemployed youngsters. Many of the institutions and industries are holding their senior employees despite recruiting energetic youth carrier seekers. Moreover, health problems related to the geriatric namely insomnia, alzheimer's disease may affect the socio - economic status of the nation. In other words, elderly people are suffered both mental and physical problems, so that, increased medical services and nursing care, which would be high expenses may alter the financial standard of the country. For instance, recent survey of OECD countries elaborate that older inactive workers are double from 38% in 2000 to just over 70% in 2050.
However, a possible solution for this problem is statutory retirement age and pension. Most of the workers are not ready to retire because of their poor socio-economic status and fear of failure to success after pullout. These situation governments commit to the legislative reform such as fixed retirement age for both government and private sector. Furthermore, pension must be transparent and accessible to all individuals, and thereby they can plan for their retirement and would likely to have their allowance as they urgently required. Finally, companies should encourage all people to take medical insurance and policies to reduce financial crisis associated with old age illness.
In conclusion, hiking life expectancy is an achievement of medical field of a nation, nevertheless, that may change the socio-economic status of the world, if the government failed to take more actions to the old age population plan of care. Intellectual movement of above mentioned interventions would significantly change the arousing problems of senior citizens of the whole world.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276485788114 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.129198966408 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.139534883721 0.0946595960268 147% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0335917312661 0.0501214627716 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0180878552972 0.0437548338989 41% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113695090439 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0387596899225 0.0403226058552 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88897123075 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0335917312661 0.0326793684256 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0956072351421 0.0861772015684 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0258397932817 0.021408717616 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00258397932817 0.011925033212 22% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2332.0 1933.35771543 121% => OK
No of words: 353.0 316.048096192 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.60623229462 6.12580529183 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.447592067989 0.374742101984 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.345609065156 0.28420135186 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.257790368272 0.203846283523 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.172804532578 0.137316102897 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88897123075 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.037074148 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614730878187 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 73.624904438 60.7387585426 121% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.2142857143 20.7743622355 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7665019756 49.517814964 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.571428571 127.492653851 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7743622355 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 59.7751922299 49.1944974215 122% => OK
Elegance: 2.37142857143 1.69124875643 140% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378420157737 0.332605444948 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0999366440857 0.102741220458 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0592441766781 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.570860879061 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144951772518 0.148594505496 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147311080025 0.134430193775 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656671933022 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.270134203877 0.324371583561 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0241360450605 0.0638462369009 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256471155974 0.228012699653 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480636402126 0.058150111329 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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