The figure shows the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries. The participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature.
» You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates, the survey outcome of 1000 adolescence related to the permitted age of being some sort of rights and responsibilities in young age. Research subject was marriage, voting and criminal responsibilities in USA, UK, Mexico, Japan and Egypt.
Overall, majority of countries reported for marriage and voting can be granted after the age of 15. In comparison, Japan was the only country mentioned criminal responsibility applied over 15 years of age.
USA and Mexico reported marriage and voting can be granted during 18 and 16 years old respectively. While, Mexico voted for criminal responsibility needs at 15 years, in turn, USA account for 12 years. Similarly, Egypt mentioned age over 15 was the time for marriage (16) and voting (18). While, for Criminal responsibility comprise of 14 years old.
However, Japan reported the highest age for marriage and voting among other countries such as 23 and 20 years respectively. Whilst, in UK consist of marriage at the of 21 and voting age was 16. Moreover, criminal responsibility was the least age in UK (20 years) in contrast Japan which is on eighteenth birthday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
... 18. While, for Criminal responsibility comprise of 14 years old. However, Japan report...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...4 years old. However, Japan reported the highest age for marriage and voting ...
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the least age in UK 20 years in contrast Japan which is on eighteenth birthday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, similarly, so, while, in contrast, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08414764584 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521505376344 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5132440085 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.7272727273 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131913184426 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649763604438 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601846922424 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104245336275 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552876748737 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.