In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing.
What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
The last few decades have seen enormous changes in the way people lives are related to increasing life expectancy. This led to major health problems for individuals and considerable decline in the society productivity and income. This essay will reveal the potential repercussions of aging along with providing some solutions.
One concern in terms of increasing age of individuals is that elder people will suffer from life menacing diseases. This is because deterioration of body organs with ageing, which in turn leads to development of lethal conditions such as cancer, stroke, and myocardial infarction. In particular, a new study stated that patients aged more than 65 years were eight times more susceptible to develop colon cancer, in contrast to those less than 65-years-old. To tackle this issue, local municipalities should impose a comprehensive screening program for early detection and timely management of different diseases among elderly population. This might result in decreasing the mortality rate and improving quality of life.
Turning to the impact of increasing life expectancy on society, it can be clearly evident that the social integration might be affected negatively. That is to say, the ratio between young adults and elderly people can be reversed, which in turn leads to a noticeable collapse in the productivity and income of the society. For example, in Germany, the number of qualified-hand- workers experienced dramatic decline throughout the past era. This is because employers may loss the capability to work with aging. To overcome this issue, qualified elderly population shall educate young people to take the responsibilities. If the local authorities establish the adequate educational programs early, the national income of any society will increase dramatically.
In conclusion, two of the main increasing life expectancy-related issues are that elderly people will suffer from life menacing disorders and the local income of the society may be affected noticeably. Thereafter, the government and local municipalities should employ the required health and working-related programs to overcome the issues caused by aging.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to overcome the issues caused by aging.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in particular, such as, in contrast to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65853658537 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17145717545 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0459490869 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231184631346 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730217026516 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505820889323 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143468173448 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308206534723 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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