Every developing country have that type of Areas where education system is not good. It is possible if their provides educated staff with Internet facilities. I will discuss about both sides and give my opinion.
First of all , teacher is very necessary for a student to learn something .sometimes, in backward areas mostly children's don't get opportunities of education because,there are no good staff. school is that place where a child learn about discipline ,skills and show their talent .everybody can't afford computers and internet because such things are expensive. So it is not a cup of tea for poor people.students can't understand properly online study but, teachers teach them efficiently.
Furthermore ,nowadays everything is modern.every child like to spend their time on Internet. it provides us more knowledge can learn easily by computers and cell phones.government should provide internet facilities in small areas with good teaching staff.although ,internet plays important role but,the teacher tells them right way and always motivate children to achieve what they want.
to conclude,education is not possible without a teacher.government should make new School,by doing this poor people can also learn. internet should also available there to upgrade their knowledge. teachers can teach them easily by doing practical on computers.
- In developing countries children in rural communities have less access to education Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and i 56
- In developing countries children in rural communities have less access to education Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and i 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6243902439 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19525537244 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69756097561 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2641369047 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.818181818 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170307344418 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625992478086 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521525031906 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107395972474 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258498328478 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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