With the development of modern transport comes environmental problems. What possible solutions are there to these problems?
With the spread of means of transport, our planet is undergoing many issues such as rising temperatures and smog.
Even if these problems were unsolved for many years so far, with the newborn “green energy” and a more caring behaviour from the people, there seems to be a solution to preserve the environment without giving up with vehicles.
Nowadays, thanks to a impressive development of science and engineering, we are able to produce energy (mainly electric energy) from wind, sea waves and, of course, from sunlight. Although not every country is investing in those new technologies, there are some countries, like California, where you get financial assistance if you choose to buy an electric car instead of a gasoline-powered one. In many other countries like Italy, Denmark, France it has started a trend aimed to increase the numbers of station where people can charge their cars.
Of course not only cars, but also ships and airplanes need to be changed in order to save the environment.
Moreover, even if an increasing diffusion of modern transports can bring benefits, we must remember that new engines alone cannot make the difference. We should use vehicles only when we really need to: how many times have you got in your car and when somewhere near by that can be also be easily reached on foot or by bicycle? Why not using public transports instead of your car?
In the end, it’s desirable that states will make look toward electric power (with taxes and subsidies) and people would try to use vehicles only when really needed, in particular public transports to reduce emissions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s such as rising temperatures and smog. Even if these problems were unsolved for...
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Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...p with vehicles. Nowadays, thanks to a impressive development of science and e...
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Line 6, column 263, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... you got in your car and when somewhere near by that can be also be easily reached on f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, really, so, in particular, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04089219331 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74763693258 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657992565056 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7960765019 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.6 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13522688067 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494736341697 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430680982649 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067444189801 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395817706082 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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