Nowadays, we are living in an unprecedneted society in which science and technology are becoming prevelent . Therefore, there is a belief that scientists contribute more to well-beings of humans and society than artists. I do agree that scientists are undispensable in our current society but there are benefits that can be brought only from artists therefore art field should be supported to fullfill our living standards.
There are significant contributions to humans and the society can be made by artists only . Firstly, artists can bring relaxation and joy. As our society are developing, new things appeared simulateously, meaning that we are now having to undergo more difficulties and stresses in coping with new things and art such as music is proved to be effectives means of reducing stress and providing relaxation, which scientists can't achieve. Therefore, artists such as musicians and painters are only people who can provide recreations and reduce chances of contract mental health problems. Futhermore, art also contributes to making spice of life. Whithout artists we can't appreciate meaning of life and if art is disapeared the world will be imbued with dull collour and happiness and joy can no longer be found anywhere in the world.
As I mentioned aboved, art is efficacious dose in healing mental illness. Therefore, there is no reason why art shouldn't be important in our society and achieve support from the government and humans. Futhermore, along with science, art also play an imortant role in bringing advantages such as joy.
In conclsion, I belive that scientists are not multifuntional and many contributions can only be made by artists to our society. Therefore, art should be supported in our society like many other fields such as technology and sicence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27177700348 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99012795238 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526132404181 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0372419888 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273785806914 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10055775422 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442339541211 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16768751037 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516631737202 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.