Technology is regarded by some people as the chief factor that cause various environmental problems, while others think oppositely that developing technology is a good solution. Though we are facing with a series of environmental problems as a result of technology improvement, I believe that technology plays an important role in solving environmental-related issues.
Admittedly, as modern technology develops, living a life full of high-tech products does harm to the ecosystem. If human among the whole world start living a life without technical equipment such as automobiles, air conditioners and refrigerator, there will automatically be no pollution in surrounding area, especially less greenhouse gases emission. Moreover, the depletion of natural resources like fossil fuels would be reduced to a greater extent when people change their lifestyle and have a simple life, which is beneficial to the environment.
On the other hand, I do believe with technology advancement, most of environment problems can be solved. It is due to the immaturity of technology we used in the past that cause harm to the nature. However, nowadays, the continuous development of technology, such as exploitation of sustainable energy sources, recycling exhaust and sewage and improvement of the utilization rate of raw materials, can not only reduce pollutants but also optimize producing processes. Most importantly, only in this way, can we realize sustainable development and provide a clean environment for later generations.
All in all, despite the harm caused by the process of technology improvement, the top priority is to optimize technologies and take full use of them so that we can minimize potential damage to the environment.
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- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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- In times of economic crisis in which field do you think the government can cut financial support 1 Art2 Scientific research3 Parks and public gardens 42
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56603773585 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41148772341 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637735849057 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3459676002 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.5 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290004967932 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11329906446 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863953988418 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171471545799 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994831939704 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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