Nowadays people are senting their senior citizens to old age homes. Those who were sent to care homes have number of benefits and some drawbacks. This essay will argue that the people have enormous benefits from care homes and it will outweigh the possible difficulties.
Firstly, most of the old people are joining in old age homes as their children are not able to take care of them properly. Elderly populations may have number of physical and mental illness, if left uncared may pose severe threat to their life. In contrast care facilities offer various rehabilitation facilities which will enable them to be healthy. Their life become in an orderly way with routine examination and prompt medical attention, for example these centers conducting routine health checkups and vaccinations. Secondly one of the most important concern of old people is to have somebody to share their feeling, that will be fulfilled in care homes.Presently , in between busy work schedules children often forgets about their parents feelings and needs. people in care set up will live as a family and holds a community feeling, which will foster the self esteem of the elderly people.
On the otherhand; there are some drawbacks in putting the old ones in care homes, some people feels frustrated and feels worthless to live. Some care home's are under standard which will make the life of the people miserable. Many of them feels that the family can't be replaced by anything at any cost .
Overall, Old age homes are providing comprehensive care and protections to the old people which they are lacking from their families.Even though some pitfalls are observed occasionally as a whole the benefits exeeds in high margins.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Currently
currently people are senting their senior citizen...
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Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ay pose severe threat to their life. In contrast care facilities offer various rehabilit...
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Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an orderly way" with adverb for "orderly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e them to be healthy. Their life become in an orderly way with routine examination and prompt med...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...about their parents feelings and needs. people in care set up will live as a family an...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ble. Many of them feels that the family cant be replaced by anything at any cost . ...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cant be replaced by anything at any cost . Overall, Old age homes are providing c...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
...ch they are lacking from their families.Even though some pitfalls are observed occas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07885304659 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6502767472 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6046231337 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119155414517 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048180876806 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293762165378 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754930816167 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260076393664 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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