People have varying attitudes regarding the importance of studying national vs global literature and history in schools. I personally will argue for including the the local literature and history in curriculum as it will give enormous benefits to the people in a variety of ways. .
First of all pupil should have an awareness about the past and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 293.0 1615.20841683 18% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 57.0 315.596192385 18% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14035087719 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.74769620505 4.20363070211 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77564788208 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 43.0 176.041082164 24% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.754385964912 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 96.3 506.74238477 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4743235816 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17982561881 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106269099026 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793142849255 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104843827903 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104843827903 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 78.4519038076 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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