Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature and history of their own country, rather than the literature and history of other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have varying attitudes regarding the importance of studying national vs global literature and history in schools. I personally will argue for including the the local literature and history in curriculum as it will give enormous benefits to the people in a variety of ways. .
First of all pupil should have an awareness about the past and

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the
.... I personally will argue for including the the local literature and history in curricu...
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Suggestion: the; the
.... I personally will argue for including the the local literature and history in curricu...
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Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...its to the people in a variety of ways. . First of all pupil should have an aw...
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Suggestion: .
...ts to the people in a variety of ways. . First of all pupil should have an awa...
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...uld have an awareness about the past and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 293.0 1615.20841683 18% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 57.0 315.596192385 18% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14035087719 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.74769620505 4.20363070211 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77564788208 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 43.0 176.041082164 24% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.754385964912 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 96.3 506.74238477 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4743235816 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17982561881 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106269099026 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793142849255 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104843827903 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104843827903 0.056905535591 184% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 78.4519038076 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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