Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels.
Do the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages?
There is a tendency that people all over the world seem to share the same lifestyle including what do watch, what to wear, what to eat and so on. Personally speaking, the merits outweigh the demerits of this trend.
On one hand, the process of globalizing has brought benefits. To begin with, it has become more easily for people to get along with others from different background because they have mutual interests. For instance, youngsters from China and the USA can also have topics to talk about because Hollywood blockbusters and American pop music are being popular in both countries. In this way, misunderstandings from different cultures can be eliminated. Furthermore, for those who intend to migrate abroad, they may face less culture shock and be more likely to get adapt to their new life abroad since they are already familiar with the foreign culture.
On the other hand, there exist drawbacks of cultural globalization. The most obvious one is the extinction of traditional custom due to the influence of foreign culture. Take some facts as example, parents tend to send their children to learn piano or violin instead of traditional musical instruments; fast food has substituted traditional food as the main food in daily life; the number of some minor language speakers is decreasing constantly because English has become the dominant language all over the world. All these cases above indicate that cultural globalization has led some traditional cultures to vanish.
In conclusion, it makes sense why some people are worry about cultural globalization, but I believe it brings more benefits since it increases the communication between different countries and make migration more accessible.
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
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- Nowadays, it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries.Is this a positive or negative development?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. 73
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Some people think that criminals should be given longer terms in prison so as to reduce the crime rate To what extent do you agree or disagree 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26545454545 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85551575866 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632727272727 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3631946575 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155748378586 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051520015678 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545289338511 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102134068534 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731228522082 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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