Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people believe it is necessary, but others think that it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
Nowadays, there is an ongoing controversy about whether it is superior for high-position workers of large corporations to have higher salaries compared to low-position ones. Although some experts believe that this proclivity is unfair, I would align myself with the opinion that it is indispensable for directors to earn more money.
On the one hand, a plethora of justifications has prevailed some individuals to advocate the former notion. Firstly, every workers in a company are required to dedicate their endeavors to fostering the development of that organization. To illustrate, but for the contributions of ordinary employees, some prestigious electric-gadgets manufacturers like Iphone or Samsung would not thrive so strongly. Hence, it is right for these individuals to enjoy the fruits of their efforts equally. Moreover, in numerous corporations, it is observed that ordinary employees have to do arduous manual tasks in bad working conditions. For example, when working in Binh Minh company, a reputable pipe maker in Vietnam, workers in low positions tend to be required to consummate works in factories, in which the atmosphere is quite hot during burning days. Accordingly , it is imperative for corporations to offer high salaries to ordinary employees in order to encourage them and tighten companies’ bondings.
On the other hand, there are a host of factors convincing me to concede that firms had better to pay more for directors or high-position employees. The first reason stems from the fact that these individuals have to experience an enormous pressure, which is an inevitable part of their occupations. This is because their duties is to deal with contracts or tasks that play such an integral part in the development of their corporations. For instance, Elon Musk, the founder of Tesla company, has to make a great number of dicisions and contracts to increase the profit rate of his firm. Therefore, they need to be paid more for what they have contributed. Furthermore, directors are those on behalf of organizations, which requires them to have opulent styles to show the prosperity and images of their companies. This can be perfectly exemplified by the fact that when having meetings with partners, Mr.Elon Musk are prone to put on expensive clothes and accessories. Ultimately, so as to help these high-position workers to be sufficient in money to purchase luxurious things, firms need to give them more money.
In conclusion, explicitly, it is indisputable that this tendency is inequal in some facets; nevetheless, I want to affirm that high-salary policies offered to directors are very crucial, especially in terms of helping to accelerate the progression of corporations.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 853, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ite hot during burning days. Accordingly , it is imperative for corporations to of...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...ndings. On the other hand, there are a host of factors convincing me to concede tha...
^^^^
Line 3, column 904, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Elon
... when having meetings with partners, Mr.Elon Musk are prone to put on expensive clot...
^^^^
Line 3, column 981, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ve clothes and accessories. Ultimately, so as to help these high-position workers to be ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2289.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34813084112 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21813255035 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3703541829 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130610904151 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402920627581 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415599318717 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897199235182 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442566003816 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 853, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ite hot during burning days. Accordingly , it is imperative for corporations to of...
^^
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...ndings. On the other hand, there are a host of factors convincing me to concede tha...
^^^^
Line 3, column 904, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Elon
... when having meetings with partners, Mr.Elon Musk are prone to put on expensive clot...
^^^^
Line 3, column 981, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ve clothes and accessories. Ultimately, so as to help these high-position workers to be ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2289.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34813084112 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21813255035 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3703541829 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130610904151 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402920627581 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415599318717 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897199235182 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442566003816 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.