It goes without saying that,discipline is an essential part of anyone’s nurture.an argument has been put forward that, most of the people is saying, the quality of discipline which teacher can easily execute in children’s brain.at the same time other objected, it is a duty of parents.
There are several reasons why people might argue that discipline should be responslibity of teachers.to initiate with ,during the day time most of the childrens are at school.to elaborate, teacher can learn the pupils that how to behave and what are the qualities that a good student have to be in his self.whih leaves far more greater impact on students compare to parents. Furthermore, teacher can be strict to the students if needed so that the students will obey the instructions that mentors are giving reguarding discipline.so due to this reasons people claim that it is a duty of teacher.
However, some people might argue that ,parents are playing a vital role to learn the discipline to their child. And they believe that, nobody can more understand their child psychology except their parents. Thus ,according to them parents are the best teachers for their childrens.addition to this, parents are caring about their childs hence they can teach them politely.
To sum up,I firmly believe that, both the characters such as parents and teachers are equally important to teach the lesson of discipline on their places.so that Childrens can grow with the appropriate nurture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9030156734 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.1976581225 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.714285714 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2857142857 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169646384776 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814707674563 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484878607127 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993771684225 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329917122674 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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