Discuss about advantages and disadvantages of working overseas
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are moving to another country to pursue an international career. Some people believe that working abroad would bring a lot of benefits but others have many counterviews. ( quan điểm đối lập)
On the one hand, working in an advanced country helps getting higher income and having golden job opportunity. For example, the minimum salary in the US is around 2500 USD while in Vietnam it is 1200 USD. Therefore, many people can afford to have a satisfied living in prosperous foreign countries and money can be sent back to families in their homeland. Furthermore , it is a enormous chance for several fresh graduates broaden their horizons and immerse in a diverse lifestyle. To specific, in a new country you can obtain a wide variety of knowledge by making friends who can help you enhance language skills and explore culture, traditions, beliefs and food.
On the other hand, living and working abroad might lead to suffering from culture shock , which can be extremely unpleasant. Language and communication barrier are also some obstacles that international workers must overcome. Hence, it is crucial that people should learn language and customs before moving to a foreign country. The biggest disadvantage of working away from their homeland is the distance between family members. It is likely that overseas employees will only be able to return home once or twice a year
In conclusion, working abroad is believed to be a great chance for making money and take an adventure on their journey to reach the success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10505836576 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70755218539 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.118833898 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916754700492 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331587932911 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447010293417 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578657887842 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366652032988 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.