Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of playing sports and participating in physical exercises.
It is true that taking up regular exercises and playing sports is of importance to stay healthy. These physical activities bring both various potential benefits and several drawbacks to our lives.
It is essential that people should do plenty of exercise which could help build a healthy lifestyle in our fast-paced life nowadays. Firstly, while taking gentle exercises such as jogging in the park could improve physical strength, alternative forms of exercise like Tai chi, Qigong or Yoga could be a cure for mental health. These practices popular among people of all ages are effective ways to combat stress after a long hard-working day. Secondly, taking part in indoor or outdoor exercise in which there have been numerous members involving would be opportunities to form friendship and have social interactions. In fact, the likelihood of people developing a sedentary lifestyle and being isolated from communities is high since they spend many hours browsing social networking sites without a care in the world. By contrast, not only can enrolling in sports clubs or working out at the gym encourage people to have direct interactions, but also develop social skills such as communication or critical thinking skill which are beneficial for their lives.
However, playing sports and taking physical exercises could have several downsides which should be considered. From the safety perspective, anyone engaging in an extreme sport must take sensible precautions and seek expert advice. For example, paragliding and cliff-jumping are two examples of extreme sports in which life-threatening injuries are sustained all too often by those who take part. In order to reduce the risks associated with dangerous sports, participants should undergo rigorous training and use all the essential sports gear required. In addition, the problem with encouraging sport at school is that it fosters a competitive spirit among students, instead of teaching children simply to do the best that they can in all aspects of life. Also, youth sport is being ruined by a win-at-all-costs attitude, which includes cheating and breaking the rules in order to achieve victory.
In conclusion, although playing sports and taking regular exercise brings numerous advantages, people should be aware of its disadvantages and take the appropriate methods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 746, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...from communities is high since they are spend many hours browsing social networking s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44505494505 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88810882131 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.01713936 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.133333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146356808664 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544794397381 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512608189514 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110162501069 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484642736977 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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