Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of playing sports and participating in physical exercises.
Organized sports centers and gym clubs were developed and built more and more nowadays, which provides a chance for people to do some exercise and play sports conveniently. People of all ages can improve their overall health, however, there are also some drawbacks to be taken into account.
Firstly, one benefit of people doing regular exercise is that they can have a better healthy lifestyle and mental health. This has been shown to improve their mood, and decrease feelings of depression, anxiety, and stress which also help people to control their weight and gain more muscle. Secondly, playing sports or joining some clubs is also good for children when they are in school. Playing in a team gives children the opportunity to interact with others so they not only build a relationship easily but also can get over their shyness. Thirdly, some people who have talent in some sports can become professional athletes. They can turn their hobbies into professional jobs that can bring to them a lot of money and celebrity.
On the other hand, one problem is that when you play some sports with high competition such as soccer or basketball, it is impossible to prevent serious injuries. For example, a lot of football players were broke their legs by their competitors when they took part in a match, which made them have to spend more money and time to have some surgeries. Another possible issue is that the money and time people spend on playing sports needs to be considered. In some special sports such as golf, they need to spend many thousands of dollars on preparing their equipment and other fees.
In conclusion, while regular exercise or sports can bring some benefits for people, it can also lead to some dangerous issues and waste of their money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89368770764 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43109022183 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538205980066 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6629812036 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.307692308 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122507493667 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575475306386 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503823322703 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924172978436 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172399261768 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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