Discuss the benefits and drawbacks of pet ownership for animals and for the community.
Moving towards the 21st century, many people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about the role of pets in modern lifestyles. In fact, there are some who hold firmly to their belief that owning a pet brings several advantages to society. However, others argue convincingly that pets have impacts in negative ways. Therefore, some arguments both for and against this issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two main points for people to defend the former argument. First of all, it is a well-documented fact that animals are usually well-treated by their owners. The most obvious example to prove is that they got food, water easier due to they do not have to hunt or scramble with other animals in wildlife. Some pets are also cleaned-up regularly and are getting additional treatment, such as check-up and grooming. Furthermore, there is no doubt that in modern life, increasing older people is a huge issue with the community, so animals, such as dogs can become good friends for them to share their feelings. Dogs trained to assist the blind, older people to help with basic tasks like crossing the street, answering the phone and collecting the mail.
On the other hand, there are two primary pieces of evidence for people to support the latter argument. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that while people were playing with animals, they may transfer the diseases from their saliva and fur. A clear example to prove is that A recent survey shows that approximately 20 percentages of diseases are transmitted from pat animals to children in the US. Equally important, there is no denying that owning a pet is a big responsibility. This is supported by the fact that a movement space is limited so pets can feel illness as well as in wildlife. It requires much time spent, such as taking pets for regular walks to get exercise, making sure he gets fed on time, bathing him and playing with him.
All things are considered, it is my strong belief that the crucial role of pet animals in our activities. Accordingly, I strongly recommend the governments should enhance people’s awareness in terms of owning pets in our community. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our society will be secured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 645, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assisting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: assisting
...m to share their feelings. Dogs trained to assist the blind, older people to help with ba...
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Line 7, column 408, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...from pat animals to children in the US. Equally important, there is no denying that own...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in fact, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97932816537 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75542838905 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576227390181 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8333320437 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.421052632 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201340059813 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576811829507 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360484638005 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120832744396 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156081516912 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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