discuss both the views and give your opinion
In contemporary era, there are many International companies which doing business in different countries. However, few individuals believe that developing nations should invite big international companies to start businesses to help with their economic improvement while, others think that developing countries should keep multinational companies out and develop local companies in. This essay shall analyze both perspectives. I shall give my opinion with explanation in ensuing paragraphs.
firstly, there are some advantages to invite multinational companies to open offices and factories. First and foremost reason is that ,if multinational companies are coming, then the chance of employment are increase and countries people easily fulfill their amenities with work. For example, In India, there are many International companies are working.like,TCS company. TCS is a largest company in the world and it open its office or a factories in India. So, the employment chance is increase and economic growth are develop. While, un-employment rate are decrease. Thus, developing countries should invite international companies to doing business.
Secondly, if multinational companies are come for open offices in developing countries then it affect on rate of migration. To demonstrate, any multinational company come in developing country for purpose of business. It provide an opportunities to people for working abroad as well as it offer some need which is important for people. So, this people are accept this offer and migrate to other country.Therefore, population are decrease.
finally, this both perspectives are right but both countries, developing country and which coming for business purpose have need to make some rules and regulation and get some written paper and signature on it.
To recapitulate, invite multinational companies to business in developing countries are dangerous for their economic growth. On the other side, there also have some merits to invite international companies in developing nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81208053691 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25651388189 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503355704698 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.9170937026 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0428126528816 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191234489885 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457517173638 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0320311187888 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392403459062 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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