Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subjects. What extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary era, universities do not seen on male or female but they also keep eye on the abilities of students. Educational institutions ought to acquire similar quantity of boys and girls scholars in each subjects. I support to this statement to a large extent for some reasons. MY position is argued further with explanation.
Out of all the reasons, the foremost one is that colleges provide admission to all the boys and girls without seeing any type of difference . If universities will do this then all girls can take opportunities to work like a boy and society could not do comparison between male and female. Furthermore, all the bachelors are belongs to different region and they all have their own talent as well as skills. Thus, they can do discussion about region of them and they teach their skills or strategies to each other. Therefore, all boys and girls students can gain knowledge and improve talent to become multitalented person.
Additionally, boys student can learn cooking from girls and girls student can learn sports from boys. Hence, it is useful to both for their future. For great example, mostly students want to go abroad for further study nowadays but boys has to cook their food by themselves and girls could deffence themselves from robbery as well as thief at every place. So, it can be very useful for men and women students.
However, I would not overlook the other side too. To begin with, boys and girls students have different choices in subjects. Hence, every boy or every girl does not get satisfaction in subject which provided by colleges. Subsequently, they could not come forward in their life. Also, they all have different interest in different activities. So, boys student can not doing girls activity very well and girls student can not doing boys activity.
To draw the curtain, it can be finally commented that varsity must be given admission to similar number of bachelor men and women. I believe that boys and girls should get admit in colleges which they like and as per their interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61555150569 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4018773221 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1428571429 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13624391555 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422473616281 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459325033632 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843617721424 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366434854954 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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