Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
The death penalty is one of the most eminent punishment foe law breakers who commit some serious crimes. Few individuals perceive that there should not be used capital punishment ever; however, others argue that it should be accessible for the most concrete offenses. This essay shall analyze dual perspectives with the relevant exemplifications before I voice my opinion in ensuing paragraphs.
To initiate with, there are number of people who advocate the capital punishment is not necessary to punish offenders. This is because they believe in compassion and humanity. Furthermore, they suggest that the Government or law makers should give chance to prisoners to rehabilitate themselves through some education and few activities which are related to community as well as charitable trusts. For example, Criminologist of the world elucidates the ratio of criminals who recover their nature from offenders to simple human, it accounted by 58 % criminals of the world. Therefore, the Government protect their populations from criminality without any types of violence.
On the other hand, the death penalty is essential for some major crime. Such as, murderer, rapist, terrorism and so on. This is because some criminals try to do crime repeatedly after completion of imprisonment. That is why some people claim that the capital punishment is needed for criminals. For instance, according to recent survey of Egypt terrorist attack, two of them captured by armed forces and gave the death penalty to them, after that, No one can courage to did this type of activity in Egypt. Thus, this can be lucrative for country as well as it give liberty to citizens to live life.
To recapitulate, after discussing the both of perspectives that the death penalty is necessary and unnecessary, I personally believe that it should not be compulsory to give the death penalty to criminals who commit minor crime but also it should be compulsory for major criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24600638978 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91281343877 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3399996599 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.466666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328484513821 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985970098995 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10215314027 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207459681668 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908075557455 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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