With divorce rate and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be.
Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.
t is believed that families nowadays are not connected compare to families in the past because of the rise in the divorce cases. This essay will present the causes and offer solutions to tackle the issue.
In my point of view, the main reason of this problem is the difference between the old lifestyle and the modern lifestyle. In the past, woman was the person who stayed at home to do housework and took care the children while the man was breadwinner. The life today is much more harder than before and gender equality is widespread throughout the world. It has become increasingly popular for both parents to work. As a result, more and more children now grow up without care and love from their mothers and fathers. That complained why families are not as close as they used to be. Another reason is people nowadays spend most of their time on personal work and forgot family.
In order to solve this problem and make families closer, we must change our awareness and lifestyle. Out of work time, we should spend more time with family, talking with them to understand others better. We should stay away from television, smartphone, … and go camping, fishing or somethings else with or beloved family.
Conclusion, in my opinion, growing distance among family’s members caused by the changing in lifestyle and daily activities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: T
t is believed that families nowadays are ...
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Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that families nowadays are not connected compare to families in the past because ...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'harder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: harder
...was breadwinner. The life today is much more harder than before and gender equality is wide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8864628821 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52817686624 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650655021834 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5349170224 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.0769230769 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227575368585 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794186008466 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842316202675 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133765806748 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588067779973 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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