“Divorce” should be possible between parents and their kids. Do you think so?
In today's modern society, “divorce” between parents and children is uncommon, but the probability of occurrence is possible. However, not every family can cut it off if they want to, it depends on many necessary conditions, which I will present in the following paragraphs.
Family is the most important place in everyone's life, the characteristics of parents will be passed on to their children through different upbringing of each family. The relationship between parents and children is always connected, but there are many effects that make them become distance or culminate in hatred. In modern society, there are many toxic parents, who always find excuses to beat their children to satisfy their conscious anger, in addition to the domestic violence we often see on TV, the Sexual abuse from parents towards their children is also a gruesome fact.
In the view of fact that, whether in Vietnam or abroad in general, there are a plenty of children who are physically and mentally abused by their own parents, those children may grow up, but the scratches on their minds will not fade. For instance, a man in the US locked his daughter in the basement to rape her so that she gave birth to incestuous children, but the case became known only when she escaped and reported the police. If she had decided to end her relationship with her father in the first place when she realized that her father always had disgusting intentions, the outcome might have been different.
In brief, children are the future of the country, so if their parents are people who often abuse and threaten to kill them, the law should support them a "divorce" application with their parents to let them live in a better family. Due to the truth for the good points, I strongly aware that it's important to cut off the parent-child and mother-child relationship with families where violence occurs and parents imprison their children. It is absolutely necessary to strengthen the future of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... kill them, the law should support them a 'divorce' application with th...
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Line 4, column 453, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
... parents imprison their children. It is absolutely necessary to strengthen the future of children. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, for instance, in addition, in brief, in general, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99399399399 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81015944302 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546546546547 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.777385694 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.181818182 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190337572709 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742929997496 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610659748965 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116700230871 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535859390974 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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