In the modern world, many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the current 4.0 technology era, a plenty of the country's human resources lack some sort of interpersonal expertise such as communication and teamwork. Social skills that are eclipsed by electric devices may be to blame. In the following paragraphs, I will analyze the causes of this situation worldwide. In the following paragraphs, I will analyze the causes of this situation worldwide.
First of all, when electronic devices along with popular social networking sites such as facebook, Instagram and online games with their own messaging tools have created new steps for people's life that made face-to-face communication absent. Humans depend on them more than spending time with friends or outdoor activities, many parents are always busy with work and do not spend time playing or talking with their children is also a reason. Not only that, the education of the country also affects children quite a lot in their lifestyle and thinking, many schools only focus on teaching hard knowledge to children but do not support them to build basic soft skills such as communication with classmate via creating a study group, it has increasingly pushed this situation to become more common.
The consequences of the lack of essential soft skills leave a lot of consequences for those who do not possess it such as not building good relationships with colleagues, customers, poor work results when they can’t discuss or decide on all matters. The most common are the interviewers when applying for jobs, by not being open and difficult to communicate with strangers, causing themselves to lose points with the advisory board, which leads to them not being hired and becoming unemployed. To talk about the data of this situation, Vietnam can be an example with the unemployment rate of working age in 2022 is 3.22%, increasing to 0.54% compared to 2021. In addition that, due to socially inactive, it will form loneliness, which has a negative impact on mental health or worse is depression.
In brief, the proficient training of professional hard skills for employees is extremely necessary, but besides that, communication skills are also one of the things that need to be noted. To my own supports, I totally consume that practicing soft skill will help people feel more confident when applying for jobs as well as building good relationships with colleagues and customers to help achieve higher work performance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 663, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ncreasing to 0.54% compared to 2021. In addition that, due to socially inactive, it will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, well, in addition, in brief, sort of, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15776081425 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87419870576 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.5665963318 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.923076923 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2307692308 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203686955459 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739640274718 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398891255841 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128604326718 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143564717044 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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