In the modern world, many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Currently many employees do not have assential soft skills, suchlike easily communicate with each other and team building. I think that the main causes are young people living on social media more than real life. And this essay below will discuss and explain more about my points of view.
To begin with my stating, many young people have spent all of their free time online, so they simply have learned interpersonal skilld in the real world, if a person spends all their time on social media, such as Facebook or tiktok, or playing online games. As a result, young people might be uncomfortable talking dealing with someone face-to-face.
Moreover, Difficulties in interpersonal communication can also be attributed to the shape of modern life, a lot of people focus more on their studies than soft skills. while most of education systems in diverse countries include only curriculum for academic purposes and knowledge, students suffer from lack of sort skill. As a result, a major part of student really care only about their grades, even have social phobia. Therefore, young people should be encouraged to join a club or sports team while they are studying in order for them to build necessary interpersonal skills like cooperation and teamwork.
In conclusion, nowadays soft skills are becoming more and more important, and maybe in the future they will be even more essential, being a successful employee is not just about having the relevant expertise, but it is also about being to interact with one’s colleagues. Young people should be given opportunities to develop these skills while they are gaining their academic ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...more on their studies than soft skills. while most of education systems in diverse co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15298507463 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66449003161 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5619697181 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.545454545 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149156714118 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564385843193 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042073686385 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089163092627 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034679410511 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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