In the modern world, many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Currently, many employees do not have essential soft skills, suchlike easy-communicating with each other and team-building-working. In my perspective, I suppose that the main causes are young people living in virtual platforms more than in the real life. And, this essay below will discuss and explain more about my points of views.
To begin with my stating, many a young person has wasted all of their free time online; thus, they have not learned interpersonal skills in the real world, when spending all his time on social media, such as Facebook or Tiktok, or playing online games. As a result, young people might be uncomfortable talking or dealing with someone directly. For instance, a university student who always gets almost his time on Facebook interaction, the consequence will be shown that he gradually becomes less confident in communication, has got the raw information which is not clearly proved to be sure; or even the most severe happening could be over-stressed and get intention to be too negative on his living. Thus, I do not completely support to the notion for over-using the virtual-social interactions for gaining life experience.
Moreover, difficulties in interpersonal communication can also be attributed to the shape of modern life. In fact, there are plenty of people those who focus more on their educating studies than gaining soft skills through the reality. Whilst most of educational systems in diverse countries include only curriculum for academic purposes and knowledge, students suffer from lacking of soft skills. Therefore, a major part of students really care only about their grades, even have social phobia. In parallel, young people should be encouraged to join a club or a sports team during the period when they are studying in order for them to build necessary interpersonal skills like cooperation and teamwork. When all mentioned suggestions are set in line, to my personal thoughts, the soft skills which are gain in the period of studying time would obviously be helpful and important for the future career after students’ graduation.
In conclusion, I strongly admit that being a successful employee is not just about having the relevant expertise, but also having interactions with one’s colleagues. That is the core reason why the young people should be given opportunities to develop these skills while they are gaining their academic progress to avoid being not well-prepare for their career path and lacking of the adaptation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27819548872 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0433042269 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576441102757 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9499530463 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.4 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164474079423 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546914119141 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365793368514 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100086005263 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269404990869 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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