Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your ownknowledge or experience.
everyone who wants success must try hard and constantly learn to develop themselves. so, famous people are of no exception. it is said that we are paying them a great amount of money. I strongly disagree with this because I think they are worth it. I will tell clearly my opinion in this essay.
Firstly, as other jobs, celebrities also have to work hard and not all of them have talents like acting or singing when born. Surely, you have heard this saying by Albert Einstein : “genius have 1% inborn talent and 99% comes from training”. For example, you can see many Korean trainees who have to compete with others to have the opportunity to debut. it is really an intense competition to become an
idol. Secondly, very few people reach the top levels of music, acting or even sports. do you think after they work hard day and night and get the chance to debut, they will be famous and earn a lot of money? if you think so, you are totally wrong. In showbiz, every year thousands of people have plans for their debut. but it's even harder to make an impression on the public and gain a reputation. Therefore, they absolutely deserve to be paid a high income for their efforts.
Besides, jobs like nurses, teachers or doctors all have stable salaries but well-known people do not always have much money every month. And they don’t have retirement pensions, either. All the money they have when they get old is the products they made when they were young. one thing no one can deny is that celebrities are people who have a great influence on society. many famous people often use their fame and money for good cause. if they give money to charity, others will do so too. In addition, if we use our own money to pay for their products, we are probably doing charity work indirectly.
In conclusion, I believe that celebrities deserve to be paid for their efforts. everyone has to
work hard to get paid, no job is more idle than another. so, don't compare jobs and careers with each other because each profession has its own advantages and disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38147399616 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1784030775 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.08 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.72 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135184195614 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405703406956 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400309864839 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710215918729 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037533270553 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.