Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Parents are the best teachers use specific region and example to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents are the best teachers use specific region and example to support your answer.

It is universally acknowledged that"Parents are the god for their children".It is argue that parents play a phenomenal role to teach the children which makes them successful in life. Here, i would like to accord with given statement.

To commence with, there are multifarious points to explain my point of view. First and foremost, teaching lesson, cultural and social poems as well as stories by parents makes them responsible as well as cultural oriented. What is more, teaching way of parents is polite and modify in distinct way for better development of juveniles according to different age grou...

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.It is argue that parents play a phenomenal role to teach the children which makes them successful in life.
.It is argued that parents play a phenomenal role to teach the children, which makes them successful in life.

teaching way of parents is polite and modify in distinct way
the teaching way of parents is polite and modified in a distinct way

because teachers has equal importance as parents
because teachers have equal importance as parents

as a teacher in childrens life.
as a teacher in children's lives.

Sentence: The role of techers is terrific to evolve various skills like responsibility, discipline and co-operative by organising competitions in school.
Error: organising Suggestion: organizing
Error: co-operative Suggestion: cooperative
Error: techers Suggestion: teachers

Sentence: Furthermore, teachers are more experianced than parents so they play a vital role in development of children.
Error: experianced Suggestion: experienced

Sentence: So, parents play a insignificant role as a teacher in childrens life.
Error: childrens Suggestion: children

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Why you write the fourth paragraph to fight against your idea that 'Parents are the best teachers'?

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