Usually, directors are paid much higher salaries than simple workers. some people agree with this but others believe it unfair. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Code of conduct is laid down by higher authorities in companies to ensure smooth running of its business affairs . Some people reckoned thar directors are paid more inspite of less burden of work while workers are given less salary as compared to their working abilities . Here , I would like to discuss the pros and cons of this fact along with my own perception .
Multifarious points can be put down to shore up former view . First and foremost , directors , being the supreme authority, are responsible for laying down the policies and procedures for the entire organisation and also ensu...
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in long run.
in a long run.
Sentence: Some people reckoned thar directors are paid more inspite of less burden of work while workers are given less salary as compared to their working abilities .
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Error: thar Suggestion: than
Sentence: Thus, they should be entitled with handsone amount of salary for their work.
Error: handsone Suggestion: handsome
Sentence: Thus , they could devise iptimal solutions for inherent risks .
Error: iptimal Suggestion: optimal
Sentence: They think that plans are taken out and executed at lower levels by workers only as they are directly linked to given level of output but despite this, they get low remenuration .
Error: remenuration Suggestion: regeneration
Sentence: Wages of workers should be linked to the production process so that they could get reward, incentives, bonouses accordingly.
Error: bonouses Suggestion: bonuses
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 382 350
No. of Characters: 1894 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.421 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.958 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.615 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.609 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.418 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.26 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.457 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.016 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5