There is no doubt , television plays crucial role in children life. Few people believe that watching a lot of TV programs are bad for juvenile . I agree with this nation and this as they would satellite on the wider reason in this upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with , there are myriad of reason why people think watching TV is dead for children. The first and foremost reason is that it puts a bad effect on children eyes. To elaborate it, if they spend a lot of time to watching TV it will put effect their eyesight. For instance, in 2012 a survey was conducted by a Canadian University in which they found most of children were wearing glasses who spent more time behind the TV screen. Thus, children face difficulties to watch without glasses. Moreover it is also leads to health problems such as obesity and overweight by watching television children are being obese. Because they do not like to to participate outdoor activities. As a result ,they become unhealthy.
Furthermore their academic performance starts godown by watching alot of TV. To explain it they do not take an interest in their practical or theoretical work and give more preference to watch television rather than participate in a educational activities. For example, headline of the Hindu in 2012 revealed that 60% of children educational attainment bent down due to watching more TV programs. Therefore they cannot perform good in their school. Last but not the least season cannot spend quality of time with their family because of TV addiction. Hance, their family bond also be very weak.
In conclusion, all the television gives the opportunity to learn children , I believe that watching a lot of television is not good for the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92783505155 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73965422218 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4624625712 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217987614727 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724393157094 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532035959672 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157158557766 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393443619874 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.