Do you believe that professional athletes make good role models for young people?
As we know sports are very important id day to day life and teenagers are most group of people get attraction towards athletes. In my opinion, athletes cab be both good role models or bad role models for youngsters.
First of all, successful athletes have many of good behaviors in their life that can give positive effects om their followers. For example, athletes always try to keep their body healthy and intact by doing practice, workout, games and sometimes avoid unhealthy foods. Consequently, this will encourage young people to do same things because they are trying to mimic them. Secondly, professional athletes give good lessons about time management, teamwork, respect others, attempting hard for goals and how to lose and win gracefully. All above cited points making athletes good role models for teenagers and young people.
On the other hand, there are other aspects of athletes’ life that can give harmful impact on their fans. For instance, some professional athletes involve in advertisements through TV and social media which is way to earn more money, but it gives wrong lesson for youths because they could try to earn money illegally. Also, some athletes are taking drugs to build muscle and give then energy before game, so young people will try to take some drugs without asking doctors which could effect on their health and growth. In order to that, professional athletes can be bad role models also.
In conclusion, professional athletes are mostly admired from teenagers and young people and they can be both efficient or harmful heroes.
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also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1007751938 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52640642084 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3900538649 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401137647526 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154258663697 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105684506874 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242562018156 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747117671641 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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